White paper
Do not stare me like that
You scare me with your precision.
You are what you are supposed to be
But look, at me....
Look
Do you feel saddened by my anger?
Is there something in you that narrates my silence.
Are you perturbed?
I am your emaciated cousin…
Dressed in fleshy glory..
We will unite someday when our voids rift apart
And death plays it Holy charm.
I await that ceaseless remorse
That would plunder all my apprehensions
And prove
That loneliness and noise are all the same
Open your eyes…
Your life is buried like a white page.
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gives out a sense of darkness, broken somethings and well....a dark picture all together. its nice. but keep writin stuff that throws light on the brighter side. cause u and i know life is brighter than sunshine :-) words - best tool for communication. use it wisely. keep the writin on the flow \,,/ regards Ash
ReplyDeleteGood one Abhi.. conveys a pretty dark sense to it... expresses deep pain....
ReplyDeleteNice one.. but as the previous comment author said, I'd really love to see the brighter side of things. Like writings which stretch far from the marauded scheme of things...
Keep writing.. it's always a pleasure to read you..
I know that your blog is all about the feelings that create a surge and turmoil in the mind, but in this ghastly world, enough matters are there to vex us.
ReplyDeleteA gradual shift in the theme of your writings would be really pleasant to witness.
Loved this one too. A lot.
ReplyDelete"I am your emaciated cousin…
Dressed in fleshy glory.." beautifully phrased.
PS: But ill have to disagree with the above comments. There are enough "happy faces" around us. We could all use some reality, some catharsis.
I agree that looking at the better side of things provides comfort, But facing what it is and what it feels like provides healing.
Just my opinion and considering my work has dark themes running throughout, i felt the need to defend it :)
a suggestion if i might, experiment a little with rhythm(not rhyme). better the reading experience, good as it already is :)